So this book really felt like two novellas reworked so they'd fit together. but I really didn't mind. I loved seeing more of Riley and Jack, hopefully this won't be the last time. I wish the business angst had been a little different, feels like we'd already seen that before. With Robbie and Eli's backgrounds i wish there had been more time devoted to them overcoming the bad things in their pasts, but what was there worked for how quickly they got together.